hey there~ about the critique.. I know what you mean, critique is what pushes skills forward and helps.. however, I can't criticise (or however it's called O,o) very well, and especially I don't feel comfortable giving advices to Artist..
but to say something actually, well.. in this particular picture I like colours and contrast.. it caught my eye. I know you have very specific and I have to say really awesome style, but when you look through your gallery, it's kinda all the same. themes, colours. I mean, I'd be very pleased if I could see your sketches in your gallery here, maybe only in scraps, or realistic paintings, drawings, something is surrealistic style or whatever.. you know, I would enjoy seeing your pictures in different styles, various mediums, and I'd be glad to see how your special handwriting looks like in more areas than only this one.
<-- well, this isn't much of critique, it's more like suggestion.. or even my wish. if you feel offended by these my words or anything, my apologies, I really don't meant anything bad by this : )