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95 deviants said Its perfect , there is nothing to change in my opinion
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23 deviants said The painting is missing people
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18 deviants said I have nothing to say
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9 deviants said This painting is boring and needs more things
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8 deviants said I have some consructive critisism (write a comment)
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8 deviants said The lights are too bright
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6 deviants said The mood is too dark
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1 deviant said I think this painting is ugly

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pickleartist Jun 16, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The painting is gorgeous! But it looks a lot like your other paintings you have done of a park,sidewalk, etc... Try finding a new subject to paint, animals offer a wide variety. You should also try painting monochromatic to capture certain emotions in a painting. Blue-sadness, yellow - happiness, black-anger,etc...
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CozyComfyCouch Jun 7, 2011  Professional Photographer
How can anyone give you critique??? omg you are a master of painting!
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trixielonestar55 Jun 3, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think it would of looked nice to see people on the bench holding hands or something, its called the park of love and while the painting overall is absolutly stunning, it dosent really support the name..
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Maybe-Im-Dreaming Jun 3, 2011  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
i agree with this. :)
and it's a little bright. but i think if you added a cute little couple that would make the painting feel balanced.
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ShizukaDreams Jun 3, 2011  Student General Artist
I like it a lot! But I feel like the balance is off a bit... The weight seems to be put on the right side with the lamppost and bench, but there's nothing to even it out on the left... maybe making certain parts darker might help?
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:iconmcrflyleafdisturbed:
It is beautiful but also is very, very similar to your other paintings. You have lots of paintings set up the same way--a rainy scene with bright lights and a park bench. And sometimes, people with umbrellas. I understand that that's your forte and you do do different things occasionally, but I would like to see more diversity.
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moorkasaur Jun 3, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
The mcrflyleafdisturbed put it quite well. Indeed. When i first visited your gallery, i was stunned!! like WOW!! Thats smth! How fresh! Bright! Beautiful!
But now, its just like "same stuff again? ah well, ok"
Change subject, techniques, change media! Try smth new!

As a standalone art piece, its great... if you remove anything from your gallery, its gonna shoot. if not.. well.. its just one of many similar works.
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:iconcrazygardener:
its perfect!!! its a beautiful painting just like the rest paintings!!!
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FliegenLicht Jun 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
It's beautiful! Some have said there's no people, but I see some little silhouettes in the background. Adds to the somewhat nighttime feel of this. :) Only thing I notice is the bench - is the perspective slightly off or is it just me? :confused:
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